My eye keeps turning to you,
I only reach for those that I can't love,
I'm trapped in his grasp but I truly want you!
If only I had met you sooner,
If only I could tell you the truth.
I know you see me when he kisses my lips,
I feel so embarrassed I can't look you in the eyes,
How can you know when he's in our way?
If only you had known me before I met him,
If only you knew the truth in my heart.
I can finally talk with you alone,
But my mouth cannot form those words,
So I talk about things only you know about!
If only you knew my pain,
If only you can understand my fears for you.
We laugh and play jokes like normal,
We talk about our common interests,
I know it seems like nothing is wrong but my pain is killing me!
If only I can hold your hand,
If only you can hear these words coming from my mouth.
I have dreamed about me saying these words,
But I don't know how you would take them,
If only, if only,
You knew,
About me.
Is this true or is it like just a poem idea?
ReplyDeleteI guess it's sort of true. I had a boyfriend but I kind of liked this other guy. He has no clue I like him, then I heard a song and this just came out.
ReplyDeleteIs he cute:D is he nice?
ReplyDeleteHe's really nice, he always knows exactly what to say to me when we chat and such. And I don't really judge people by how they look. My cute may be different than your cute.
ReplyDeleteSo is he cute to you?
ReplyDeleteI would guess so, if not I wouldn't like him. It just sucks that I can't say it to his face that I like him.
ReplyDeleteWhy not?
ReplyDeleteI don't know. I just broke up with my boyfriend (See other poem) For reasons unrelated to this. And I just can't cope if he might say no. We are close friends and I don't want to ruin that. Also I have no clue what to say.
ReplyDeleteIf you are close friends then it won't ruin anything.
ReplyDeleteI guess so. But it would still seem to close to breaking up with my ex.
ReplyDeleteI guess thats true. Sigh love is hard. =(
ReplyDeleteTell me about it. I guess that's why we search so long for it. True love is like that one star always hidden by a cloud. You know it's there, but you just can't see it yet.
ReplyDeleteWishing you could move it. But only time can do so.
ReplyDeleteTime that seems to pass slowly as you stare up at the night sky.
ReplyDeleteyep darn love.
ReplyDeleteLove. We can live without the pain, but we can't live without it. Like you said, darn love.
ReplyDeleteYou seem to be a poet yourself though with that one line.
I don't know. Oh and hows it going with that one guy?
ReplyDelete(If it feels like intruding please say so
ReplyDeleteYou're not intruding at all. It's actually kind of cool that we have no idea who the other person is yet we're having a conversation.
ReplyDeleteAnd when you say "that one guy" I can't really tell who you mean.
The one guy this poems about?
ReplyDelete......Well, I don't think I'll ever be brave enough to tell him I like him. I feel such a coward. I would be fine just being in my shadows, watching from a far.
ReplyDeleteHow does he act around you?
ReplyDeleteI don't know, I gues he acts the same as always. It' hard for me to tell.
ReplyDeleteWhat I ment was is nice or funny and all that?
ReplyDeleteWell, he's always nice to everybody and he does make me laugh sometimes when we chat though. I don't really know, because I only see him 30 minutes a day.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever noticed him flirt before?
ReplyDelete....He is not the kind to flirt. I've never seen him at anything remotely like a dance or such. He seems the "wallflower" type to me if he has to go to a social event. I don't think he knows how to flirt.
ReplyDeleteEveryone knows how to flirt, and what is a wallflower type?
ReplyDeleteWallflowers are people who go to events but just stand at the edge leaning against a wall, watching everyone else have fun but not really joining in. And I don't know how the hell to flirt. All my ex's had to ask me out because I was slightly oblivios.
ReplyDeleteDo you brake up with them or other way?
ReplyDelete(Okay this is Usagi, something is wrong with my computer so I can only be Anonymous. I swear it's me.)
ReplyDeleteWell the first one, a few years back, I broke up with because when I went to Austria, I found out he was with six others. I think it's fair.
The second was we were good friends but he had to move away so we lost touch for a while. He came bac but we never felt anything. He was the only one I asked.
Third was the last. He was two years my senior and everyone said we looked great together. I guess not.
Awww that's sad =(
ReplyDeleteYa and the third one, where I thought we were the happiest, lasted the shortest. The second one only lasted more than a year because he moved but we still said we were going out.
ReplyDeleteWell I hope you last a long time with him.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Well, now I have the blessings all I need is the courage.
ReplyDeleteIt can take you a long way .
ReplyDeleteI hope it does.
ReplyDeleteOhh it will.
ReplyDeleteHow are you sure about that?
ReplyDeleteBecause why would he say no?
ReplyDeleteShe don't lie.
ReplyDeleteAnd how do you know Ishymaru? And correct grammer is "doesn't" not "don't"
ReplyDeleteBecause its true. (and i know)
ReplyDeleteWhat's true?
ReplyDeleteWhat she said why would he say no?
ReplyDeleteWell this has been thw problem the whole time. I don't know if he would say no. I have no courage!
ReplyDeleteEveryone worries about love even if they don't show it. But courage is not needed, only the proof of the love.
ReplyDeleteBut how do you prove it? I thought I proved it with my last ex but I guess he was too much of a jerk to see it.
ReplyDeleteThe best way to prove it is just saying 3 words I love you.
ReplyDeleteYou don't know how many time I said that to him! And when you do say it and get rejected, it's heart crushing!
ReplyDeleteLove can be uncertain. He did say it back to you right?
ReplyDeleteYes. Quite often actually.
ReplyDeleteWell then you did prove your love, and so did he. But nothing is perfect, and people always find out how non-perfect something is the hardway. Sometimes with love, sometimes with a computar. But love, just like a computar, can be fixed, sometimes with it being replaced, or with it forgeting the past and looking at the presant.
ReplyDeleteIshy-kun. You have a gift and that's all I can say.
ReplyDeleteYa I surprised myself with that. And your welcome.
ReplyDeleteSooo who is this guy?
ReplyDeleteYou think I would tell you?! Nope! It's my secret!
ReplyDeleteSigh fine but, I shall let you know that, in time, all secrets shall reach me.....most likely i will foget the secret unless it involves me or i notice that its true all the time.
ReplyDeleteStill can't and won't say. There are things that even you can't know.
ReplyDeleteAwww please!!!!!!!! At least a hint!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHe's a guy. And he's a sophmore.
ReplyDeleteWell that was really helpful. =P
ReplyDeleteWasn't it?
ReplyDeleteYa.......no can I have a better hint. Pleassssssssssssseeeeeee!!!!!!!!??????
ReplyDeleteLet's see...He likes my stories, I don't talk to him that much though. We don't know each other that well because we have no classes together. We like the sam kind of music(That should narrow it down a lot!).
ReplyDeleteHow do you know you like him if you don't know much about eachother?
ReplyDeleteWell, we know each other but not like specifics. We do talk sometimes. But for me it feels like the love is one-sided.
ReplyDeleteYou never know. He might feel the same way.
ReplyDeleteWell I don't want to embearass myself!
ReplyDeleteHow would it be embarising?
ReplyDeleteIf he says no, if he doesn't like me, if he already has someone. So many "if's"!
ReplyDeleteWell if he didn't like you he wouldn't hang out with you. If he was with someone else he would have said something. Not all ifs are bad.
ReplyDelete...I still can't tell him.
ReplyDeleteIt can't be that hard can it?
ReplyDeleteHave you ever tried asking someone out? It's damn hard!
ReplyDeleteIf it's hard then you do love him.
ReplyDeleteI guess. How can I tell him then?
ReplyDeleteWell I would try to know them as much as I can.
ReplyDeleteI can't tell you who he is though!
ReplyDeleteNo I ment you should try to know more about him.
ReplyDeleteI know a bit about him.
ReplyDeleteOhhh so you do.
ReplyDeleteHey what did I miss.
ReplyDeleteIshymaru and myself argueing. I think that's it.
ReplyDeleteI know it is!!!
ReplyDeleteHow did you find out?
ReplyDeleteI always find out everything.
ReplyDeleteHow did you find out?
ReplyDeleteShe told me. Turned out it was me. =D
ReplyDeleteOh really? Congratulations =)
ReplyDeleteIshymaru, I only told you after you needed 15 facts. Even then you needed about 20 text messages.
ReplyDeleteWell it would have been embarising if I guessed me and it wasn't. I had to make sure. ;)
ReplyDeleteIts really good feeling when I read this and I know who its about.
ReplyDeleteSo how many times have you read it?
ReplyDeleteWhen ever I feel down or need cheering up. ;)
ReplyDeleteAwww. This only made it to 96 comments. Oh so close.
ReplyDeleteThere I changed that. ;)
ReplyDeleteWell that would have been funny if I posted that on March 1st 10:21 :p
DeleteBut you were three days, one hour, and eighteen minutes late.
DeleteYa ya, I know, just saying it would have been cool.
DeleteP.S: 100th comment! Do I get a prize?
At 12 in the morning? Ya think I'm going to give you a prize when you were up at midnight?
DeleteWhy not? I say midnight is a great time to earn a prize. :D
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