New Book Idea!!

I know that my manager will hate me, but I like this idea. It has a lot of cliche terms and styles but I'll see if it works for you guys!

The figure made no noise, only a small metal click with each step coming from their necklace. An old, figureless, sweater with old boots, blue jeans, and a conductors type hat outlined the figure. The sidewalk and surrounding areas were completely deserted except for a man walking in the direction of where the figure stood in the shadow. The figure took a menacing step forward into the visible area around the single, flickering, streetlight. The man noticed the figure was about to turn the the opposite direction when the streetlight flashed out. With the remaining light from the harvest moon, high in the sky, let the man see the figure pull out a gun. The last image the dead man walking saw was the blood thirsty eyes anchored over the cruel smile aimed down at him and the thin stands of hair blowing in the slight breeze.

So this is the basic idea I dreamt up during the Like-A-Thon. If you don't know what that is, look at my other blog and read the post done on this same day! Give your feedback if I should keep working on this!